FIRST DRAFT _ Checklist



  • YES! there is a brief overview relating to globalisation

  • YES! you would be able to guess by reading the introduction

  • YES! It's relation to my own subject area and narrow down the focus of the essay.

  • YES! there's a Thesis Statement

  • Well about the correct length.. it's around 200, so maybe I have to change this..

My Global Ideas.. and Sustainable Food System


We live in a luxury world for ones but we also live in a world with poverty, famines and overpopulation. What's this global phenomenon represent for our real life, in special for food production? Integration of world economy? So one of the factors to grown the economy in the world is when food system has burgeoned in face of globalisation. Moreover, the chemical products like fertilizes and pesticides were used for modern agriculture solving the problem of overpopulation. However, terrible disasters for our environment and unsustainable agriculture reflect this time our real world.